My family and I were walking to our apartment. Then I heard something. It was the path. It was disappearing piece by piece, the street was disappearing. Then we started running. Time was running out, the path was running out. We were running as fast as we could.The path was getting faster and faster. It was becoming night, suddenly it was so dark we couldn’t see a thing. About 6 hours it got light again, then we could see again then the noise stopped. Then the path stopped disappearing but our apartment was gone. But right before their eyes was the biggest house on the planet. Then they went in, it was empty, then they decided to live there.
Then they lived happily after the end.
Good job Ethan.From Ted
ReplyDeleteVery descriptive writing Ethan. I really like your storytelling it’s exciting. Keep up the good work on this.
ReplyDeleteAnother exciting piece of writing. I think Stephen King would enjoy reading this! And it’s always nicer when people live happily ever after!
ReplyDeleteHi Ethan. Another great story. You have very good imagination for story writing - well done. Look forward to more stories. Nana
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