The mars adventure

This is my writing that my teacher has given me this week Friday. 

Hope you have enjoyed my blog today bye. 

 Gingerly, The man walked through the Misty old ancient building.  

 He wore a thick white space suit, He was as hot as a volcano erupting.

Boom! The building surrounding him just collapsed. He was  lucky to survive! 

Went on a walk

 

                 

Me and my friends were talking about going on a new walk that they have not done. They had almost done most of the walks in  London. But there was one that they hadn't which was the one were it goes right into space. 

It is probably the longest walk in the world but they have been training there hole live even when they were kids. They were like the fittest people in the world.

So we decided to do it. This is going to be really hard said one of my friend, I know it is going to be hard but it will be fun. The next morning I woke up first, I was so excited to go on this walk. My friends were excited to go on the walk as well. Three hours later they were about three quarters of the way there all of a sudden A giant Pegasus floats out of the clouds it was amazing! 

I jumped on to it it was really cool and it could talk. 

I told it to make me fly to the top and it did this was best experience. 

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My interesting writing

This is my writing I have been doing this week. 

My class and I have been working on making our sentences more interesting so we add a simile or a metaphor. Here is my two sentences:

 Ethan is as fast as a Mexican Tesla. He competed in 10 Olympic races and won them all. 

If you don't know what a Mexican Tesla  is  here is a picture. Did you know there was such a thing as a Mexican Tesla? Thanks for looking on my blog bye.